tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4167056301431528478.post2393315775866260675..comments2023-10-30T05:52:54.518-05:00Comments on Brittney Phinisee EDM 310 Blog: Blog Assignment #2Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4167056301431528478.post-1163617823743275632012-09-16T16:21:24.420-05:002012-09-16T16:21:24.420-05:00Brittany,
In your first post Did You Know 3.0...Brittany,<br /> In your first post Did You Know 3.0, I feel like there were just a few mistakes. Your links were not written correctly. From a grammatical standpoint, I think your post was written very well but there were a few mistakes here and there. I liked the information you provided about the India and china languages on how they can speak multiple languages. In the next paragraph about Mr. Wrinkle Walks is a pretty straight forward video. Your grammar was okay and your argument was valid. I feel like you enjoyed this video on Glass. You responded great to the video with some pretty good detail on how you think the future is going to be. Just for future reference, make sure you do the title and Alt modifiers correctly. Overall i think your basic understanding of the videos were great but you need to limit the mistakes on the grammatical side.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09226233547931115810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4167056301431528478.post-74941045543922567992012-09-11T15:22:37.542-05:002012-09-11T15:22:37.542-05:00Your links are not written correctly. Come to the ...Your links are not written correctly. Come to the lab for help.<br /><br />"...behind on honor students" No. It is a matter of population size. You could say that the 25% of the population in India with the biggest ears outnumbers ALL of the people in the United States with two ears. <br /><br />"With that been said, it is sad how English is the only language the United States have to learn and some can not speak fluently in it, yet another country not only know their language, but can speak English as well as the people that has spent their entire lives in speaking English." You are talking about yourself. Look at the corrections I had to make to correct your grammar and writing in just this sentence and the one that follows it:<br /><br />With that <i>having (not have)</i>have been said, it is sad how English is the only language the United States <i>has (not have)</i>have to learn and some can not speak <i>it </i>fluently <i>omit in it</i>in it, yet another country not only know <i>knows (not know)</i>their language, but can speak English as well as the people that has <i>have (not has)</i> spent their entire lives in speaking English. Dr. Strange's version enlighten <i> enlightens (not enlighten)</i> educators that technology is steady <i>steadily (not steady)</i>changing and we must continue to incorporate it in our teaching.<br /><br />There are a lot of similar mistakes (I counted at least 18 more) throughout your post. I will not correct them for you but you should either be more careful in your writing or consider going to the Writing Lab for help. <br /><br />I would also note the video says nothing about a comparative analysis of the quality of language use in the two countries.<br /><br />In general your comments are interesting and show that you read/listened to the material and understood it. You must work on your writing.John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.com